Last week we shared our English for science documentaries. Congratulations on your efforts. The videos are embedded in this post – please take a look and leave some comments for your classmates. Remember to keep your comments positive and constructive!
T05 Zoe, Janis, Enoch
T05 Natalie, Angela, Ling Ling
T05 Pansy, Eric, Tiffany
T05 Kaby, Teddie, Clarice
T05 Sharon, Emily, Rabina
T05 Saniki, Kahei, Chri
T05 Caesar, Kevin, Ryan
GE2401 Out of Sight Out of Mind T05 Group 4
Goods:
– Animation effects weren’t bad.
– Very educational
– Participants’ opinions were in detail
– Interesting data representation
– The context (problems & solutions) was covered well
– Clear voice; easy to understand the voiceover
Needs Improvement:
– Gets boring as the time goes on; hard to concentrate (Monotone & lack of background music)
* It’s hard to watch everything… Too boring.
– The background and the interview do not connect (bad editing) (1:09 – 1:10)
– Too many unnecessary parts; hard to read everything in 4 seconds before shifting to the next part of the video (2:36 – 2:40)
– Assumption part is too long and contained unnecessary information. Throw everything away except “no space between trash” part.
Very interesting scientific documentaries with a lot of graphic and animations to explain the data, facts and idea. I enjoy watching these documentaries very much.
T05 Natalie, Angela, Ling Ling
nice animations which can explain and transfer the content easily
The animation and flash is creactive and interesting, this funny explaination leads to easy understanding this scientific topic.
very interesting scientific documentaries with a lot of vivid graphics and animations to explain the ideas
T05 Natalie, Angela, Ling Ling
Seems there are too many still image and digital animation. I consider they can tap more video instead of still image with narrator.
T05 Zoe, Janis, Enoch
The video has an interesting totally blackened beginning. The special effect for the speeding up part when travelling by vehicle is also interesting. However, some part of the on site video tapping can be cut, especially for those scenes that the camera was not quite steady.
T05 Pansy, Eric, Tiffany
Eric did a great job!
The video is quite informative. But at the end, maybe some more suggestions can be given
T05 Pansy, Eric, Tiffany
– Interesting video with interesting presentation method. I will watch whole video.
– End with strong and positive message with slogan.