This week we shared our English for science documentaries. Congratulations on your efforts. The videos are embedded in this post – please take a look and leave some comments for your classmates. Remember to keep your comments positive and constructive!
T05 Hin, Bosco, Kelvin, Harry
T05 Sunny, Abby, Ally, Ariel
T05 Daniel, Maggie, Jun, Tom
T05 Rachel, MC, Deep, Vincent
T05 Eric, Fai, Keith, Lewis
T05 Maggie,Dominic, Sharon, Polly
amzing and pretty impressive
Rachel, MC, Deep, Vincent
Good introduction with nice scenes. Good statistics that were easy to understand. However, during the explanation of the table of results, the person speaking did not make much eye contact with the camera (audience).
Rachel, MC, Deep, Vincent
The introduction was pretty good! Good statistical data as well. The part explaining of the data using the big table on the whiteboard was very clear, but an improvement would be if the speaker would look at the camera (audience) more while explaining. 🙂
I love these video which had taken. Now, I have a better understanding on multitasking and sleeping.
I am going to comment on the group T05 Sunny, Abby, Ally, Ariel
It is good to add the subtitles to read.
There is also a interview for students view on multitasking which is good
There is a short introduction about the design of the experiment which make the audience easy to understand.
At the end, there are the statisitc to conclude the result of the experiment .
Comment for T05 Maggie,Dominic, Sharon, Polly
For the interview and narration part, i think it could be shorter because quite a lot of time are being used in these parts,
it is recommended to add some background musics on the video in order not to let the movie too boring.
Furthermore, i believe the video is a little bit too long .
However, overall saying, this is quite a good work.