This week we shared our English for science documentaries. Congratulations on your efforts. The videos are embedded in this post – please take a look and leave some comments for your classmates. Remember to keep your comments positive and constructive!
TO6 Yip, Franco, Kate, Alisha
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4GwEhhuRCWc&feature=youtu.be
T06 Yu, Kay, Evelyn, Daisy
T06 Tom, West, Kincy, Yentl
Betty, Alice, Edward
TA6 group 2
It is clearly to explain how the screen devices affect our sleep and the problems of sleep debt.
However, the voice of navigation is not clear enough in sometimes.
Group two, the video looks ok overall, and the English seems to be accurate, but it’s hard to watch and understand with the audio being quite noisy, as in loud background noise, combined with low voices, maybe using software to clear some static noise would improve audio quality and would make it easier for viewer to understand what is being said
For Tom’s team, the background music in the discussion part and the conclusion part is very relax. It makes a good atmosphere for the audience to think about the conclusion. Besides, you have consider the error that may affect the experiment, it is extremely good to make improvement.
The video shows the comprehensive content on multi tasking. In addition, the art effect of the video can get people’s attention and enhance better understanding on multi tasking. What is more, the interviewees can shows the effect on multi tasking.
For the video made by Tom, West, Kincy and Yentl,
I think it has an interesting introduction,
it also shows a clear flow of their interview.
However the data analysis part is quite boring.